Well done. Such a beautifully indecisive expression on Draco's face. I think expressions and lines - so fluid and graceful and strong - are your best skill at the moment.

I personally think that it would've been more effective if your Harry had a contented, happy expression - it would have made Cruel Language all the more...well, cruel and quite horrifying. (Btw, I hadn't commented to it at the fest being a mod, but oh gad, it was stunningly symmetrical in the visuals you laid out. The colours, the forms, the story, the panels, all were complementing each other so beautifully that the overall effect was incredible. It was one of your most brilliant forays into HP art, in my opinion).