oh, i'm so glad you linked to this again! i can't believe i missed it, AND i can't believe i've never read that story.

anyway, this is just LOVELY. i really love their eyes, how very shiny and bright they are. and remus' teary eye? that's really amazing how well you pulled that bit off. you can really sense the emotion captured in that scene, even if you hadn't posted the text alongside it. ♥