ok, here's my rs_games entry.

i'm going to be honest and say that i'm not happy with it. particularly the pacing in the first pages before remus kisses sirius. i think it's too rushed and the feeling of nervousness and awkwardness could have been extended -- although, without dialogue, it would have dragged for too long. there are so many things wrong with the anatomy in nearly every panel i cringe, and the lines and coloring/shading are too dirty. i would have liked to do a better job with the color (read: use other colors besides pink or greys), but i was in a hurry, and i didn't have time.

those are my complaints. nonetheless i'm happyto see it got a good reception and a good number of comments; it did make me feel a little better about it.

the image link takes you the rs_games post, the comic is posted here under the cut. there's a little ramble on the characterizations as well.


( jitters - remus/sirius - rated R )

 
 

...aaaand that's the closest thing to political commentary you'll get from me.


ps. i should create a tag named "trufax" for these, y/n?